Christmas Countdown
Friday, 24 July 2009
The Contraction Action Rap
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Contraction Action!
Hey, ho … come on let’s go!
Today in school there’s been some action
We’ve been learning about contractions.
Sit on down & listen to a tale that’s pretty phat.
Contractions, cool cats, are where it’s at!
First take one word then another.
Even better smash ‘em together and make less letters!
I’m the first word – don’t change me
Oh no, just let me be
I’m the second word – it’s ok -
make me shorter cos I know you oughta
And what do ya know, out of the blow
just one word remains – that’s plain!
The other letters that were there
Have all gone and disappeared
All that’s left is a little dot … cute as can be
That we like to call an apostrophe
So let’s go cool cats and hear some action –
give us a list of some groovy contractions ...
I’ve = I have, Wasn’t = was not, You’re = you are, He’s = he is, There’s = there is, Can’t = Can not, I’d = I had, Let’s = let us, I’m = I am, We’ve = we have, Don’t = do not, It’s = it is, She’d = she would, Isn’t = is not, Wouldn’t = would not, Didn’t = did not, We’ll = we will, Couldn’t = could not
The End!
Monday, 1 June 2009
Our Sun!

What is the Sun?
What does it do? … The Sun is a ball of gas. In the middle it’s called a core, that’s the hot part. Then there’s the Radiative zone. Next comes Photosphere and then there’s Convective Zone. Next comes Prominence and well then there’s sunspots. That’s a big storm. It’s the biggest and closest star to us. What does the Sun do? Does the Sun make air? No it gives us light and heat. That’s what the Sun is.
By Emma
The Sun
The Sun has sunspots. They are as big as Earth, don’t you think they are huge? Solar winds pull the closest star into it, that’s CRAZY! The Sun is made out of gas. In fact it is burning gas. Is that familiar? NO!
By Hollie
What is the Sun?
The Sun is a big ball of fire. If you look directly at the sun it may cause eye damage. If we didn’t have the Sun Earth would be a little ball of ice. The Sun is our nearest star. I love the Sun because it gives us light.
By Argus
The Sun
The Sun is a star, and the sun gives us warmth and light. We need light to live and grow. The Sun is bigger than 1,000 Earths. The Sun is our nearest star as well as our coolest star!
By Rose
The Sun
The Sun is a big ball of gas. The Sun gives us heat and light. When the Sun explodes we would not have light. We wouldn’t be alive.
By Buddy
The Sun
Our nearest star is the Sun. The Sun has sunspots. Sunspots are big storms. The Sun pulls out a star that is nearest to the Sun and pulls it back in again. The solar flares are like spaghetti sauce. The inside of the Sun is called a core. The nearest planet is Mercury.
By Edie
The Sun
The Sun is our nearest star. The Sun is a big ball of fire and gas. The Sun keeps us warm on Earth. The Sun makes us live on Earth.
By Isabella
The Sun
The Sun has solar flares. They are like spaghetti sauce. The Sun is made of gases. The Sun is big.
By Quinn S.
The Sun
The Sun is the solar system’s star. It gives Earth the heat and light that are essential for life on the planet. Because the Sun is only 150 million kilometres (93 million miles) away astronomers can find out far more about it than about any other star. The Sun is made of gas.
By Josh
The Sun
The Sun is our very own star. It is made out of gas and dust. It is very hot.
By
The Sun
Our nearest star is the Sun. The Sun is a big ball of gas. Did you know that the Sun has lots of holes in it. And the Sun is made of dust!
By Zoey
What is the Sun?
The Sun is big. The Sun is a big ball of fire. We liked the Sun.
By Bailey
The Sun
Did you know that the Sun is a star? It has lots of big flames called solar flares. The Sun has black and white spots.
By Luc
The Sun
The Sun is made from hot gas and dust but it is not a planet, it is a big star. The Sun is very hot but don’t look at it closely or you might damage your eyes.
By Andrea
The Sun
The Sun is our very own star. The Sun is bigger than the Earth.
By Josie
The Sun
The Sun keeps us warm.
By Ben
The Sun
Our nearest star to Earth is the Sun. The Sun has sunspots. Sunspots are storms on the Sun. The Sun grabs whatever star is closest to itself. The Sun is made out of gas and dust. The Sun makes solar wind.
By Isabelle
The Sun
The Sun is big and hot.
By Quinn M
Monday, 23 February 2009
Room 4's Writing
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I got a new bunk bed in the weekend and my brother and me and sometimes Jack goes up my ladder.
By Josh
In the weekend I went to the lagoon. I went round a lot. I went on an octopus. A boy got sick it was fun. After that we went to the mall. We got our friends a present we got him a ball and a drink bottle. And I got these bombs and you hold one hand and in the other you hold one on top of the other and when you drop it makes a bang.
By Argus
On the weekend I went to the park. My brother fell off the slide. He landed on his head and on his shoulder too.
By Andrea
On the weekend I went to the park.
By Charlotte
Today I scooted to the school. On the way I fell off my scooter and got a bleeding knee. I’ve been at the medical room. I have a band aid on my knee.
By Rose
In the weekend I went bike riding to the pool. And I got a new hat today.
By Quinn S
I went to the city to see the football.
By Ben
I went to the supermarket and I got a bleeding knee.
By Quinn M
I went to my friends, sisters birthday. I got the stupidest prize. Her name is Erina. There was no film. It was just a party. Our dad took us.
By Bianca
I went to my friends house we went to my camp.
By Lucas
On the weekend we are going to Australia we are staying in Brisbane. We are seeing people having photographs with tigers.
By Isabelle
On the weekend I went to my Aunties place. My Uncle and Auntie were leaving today. I was sad.
By Emma
On the weekend I went to the parade. And they were funny.
By Josie
I went to my Grans, I jumped off the top of the pool.
By Buddy
On the weekend I went to a fair. There was a Ferris wheel, it went zooming around. It was so much fun.
By Edie
On the weekend I got some bunk beds and I am on the top bunk. It's fun I can touch the roof.
By Hollie