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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 24 July 2009

The Contraction Action Rap

This week we have been learning about contractions ... so we decided to make up a rap about Contractions to share at Syndicate Assembly. Here is what we came up with - we think it's pretty awesome!


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Contraction Action!
Hey, ho … come on let’s go!

Today in school there’s been some action
We’ve been learning about contractions.


Sit on down & listen to a tale that’s pretty phat.
Contractions, cool cats, are where it’s at!

First take one word then another.
Even better smash ‘em together and make less letters!

I’m the first word – don’t change me
Oh no, just let me be

I’m the second word – it’s ok -
make me shorter cos I know you oughta

And what do ya know, out of the blow
just one word remains – that’s plain!


The other letters that were there
Have all gone and disappeared

All that’s left is a little dot … cute as can be
That we like to call an apostrophe


So let’s go cool cats and hear some action –
give us a list of some groovy contractions ...

I’ve = I have, Wasn’t = was not, You’re = you are, He’s = he is, There’s = there is, Can’t = Can not, I’d = I had, Let’s = let us, I’m = I am, We’ve = we have, Don’t = do not, It’s = it is, She’d = she would, Isn’t = is not, Wouldn’t = would not, Didn’t = did not, We’ll = we will, Couldn’t = could not

The End!

Monday, 1 June 2009

Our Sun!

We have been learning to write explanations this term.  Here are some of our fantastic explanations about what the Sun is.  They are "Sun-sational"!!

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What is the Sun?

What does it do? … The Sun is a ball of gas.  In the middle it’s called a core, that’s the hot part.  Then there’s the Radiative zone.  Next comes Photosphere and then there’s Convective Zone.  Next comes Prominence and well then there’s sunspots.  That’s a big storm.  It’s the biggest and closest star to us.  What does the Sun do?  Does the Sun make air?  No it gives us light and heat.  That’s what the Sun is.

By Emma

The Sun

The Sun has sunspots.  They are as big as Earth, don’t you think they are huge?  Solar winds pull the closest star into it, that’s CRAZY!  The Sun is made out of gas.  In fact it is burning gas.  Is that familiar?  NO!

By Hollie


What is the Sun?

The Sun is a big ball of fire.  If you look directly at the sun it may cause eye damage.  If we didn’t have the Sun Earth would be a little ball of ice.  The Sun is our nearest star.  I love the Sun because it gives us light.

By Argus


The Sun

The Sun is a star, and the sun gives us warmth and light.  We need light to live and grow.  The Sun is bigger than 1,000 Earths.  The Sun is our nearest star as well as our coolest star!

By Rose 

 

The Sun

The Sun is a big ball of gas.  The Sun gives us heat and light.  When the Sun explodes we would not have light.  We wouldn’t be alive.

By Buddy

  

The Sun

Our nearest star is the Sun.  The Sun has sunspots.  Sunspots are big storms.  The Sun pulls out a star that is nearest to the Sun and pulls it back in again.  The solar flares are like spaghetti sauce.  The inside of the Sun is called a core.  The nearest planet is Mercury.

By Edie

  

The Sun

The Sun is our nearest star.  The Sun is a big ball of fire and gas.  The Sun keeps us warm on Earth.  The Sun makes us live on Earth.

By Isabella


The Sun

The Sun has solar flares.  They are like spaghetti sauce.  The Sun is made of gases.  The Sun is big.

By Quinn S.

  

The Sun

The Sun is the solar system’s star.  It gives Earth the heat and light that are essential for life on the planet.  Because the Sun is only 150 million kilometres (93 million miles) away astronomers can find out far more about it than about any other star.  The Sun is made of gas.  

By Josh

  

The Sun

The Sun is our very own star.  It is made out of gas and dust.  It is very hot.

By Charlotte

  

The Sun

Our nearest star is the Sun.  The Sun is a big ball of gas.  Did you know that the Sun has lots of holes in it.  And the Sun is made of dust!

By Zoey 

 

What is the Sun?

The Sun is big.  The Sun is a big ball of fire.  We liked the Sun.

By Bailey

  

The Sun

Did you know that the Sun is a star?  It has lots of big flames called solar flares.  The Sun has black and white spots.  

By Luc

 

The Sun

The Sun is made from hot gas and dust but it is not a planet, it is a big star.  The Sun is very hot but don’t look at it closely or you might damage your eyes.

By Andrea

  

The Sun

The Sun is our very own star.  The Sun is bigger than the Earth. 

By Josie

 

The Sun

The Sun keeps us warm.

By Ben 


The Sun

Our nearest star to Earth is the Sun.  The Sun has sunspots.  Sunspots are storms on the Sun.  The Sun grabs whatever star is closest to itself.  The Sun is made out of gas and dust.  The Sun makes solar wind.

By Isabelle

 

The Sun

The Sun is big and hot.

By Quinn M

Monday, 23 February 2009

Room 4's Writing

Today we wrote about what we did on the weekend. Here are our awesome pieces of writing!

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I got a new bunk bed in the weekend and my brother and me and sometimes Jack goes up my ladder.
By Josh

In the weekend I went to the lagoon. I went round a lot. I went on an octopus. A boy got sick it was fun. After that we went to the mall. We got our friends a present we got him a ball and a drink bottle. And I got these bombs and you hold one hand and in the other you hold one on top of the other and when you drop it makes a bang.
By Argus

On the weekend I went to the park. My brother fell off the slide. He landed on his head and on his shoulder too.
By Andrea


On the weekend I went to the park.
By Charlotte

Today I scooted to the school. On the way I fell off my scooter and got a bleeding knee. I’ve been at the medical room. I have a band aid on my knee.
By Rose

I went to a concert. It was fun. They sang a school song. I made a friend there. Her name was Francesca. We bought heaps of stuff. It was fun. I went with Chelsea and Tasha and mum and dad and their mum and dad it was fun.
By Isabella

In the weekend I went bike riding to the pool. And I got a new hat today.
By Quinn S


I went to the city to see the football.
By Ben

I went to the supermarket and I got a bleeding knee.
By Quinn M


I went to my friends, sisters birthday. I got the stupidest prize. Her name is Erina. There was no film. It was just a party. Our dad took us.
By Bianca

I went to my friends house we went to my camp.
By Lucas

On the weekend we are going to Australia we are staying in Brisbane. We are seeing people having photographs with tigers.
By Isabelle

On the weekend I went to my Aunties place. My Uncle and Auntie were leaving today. I was sad.
By Emma


On the weekend I went to the parade. And they were funny.
By Josie

I went to my Grans, I jumped off the top of the pool.
By Buddy


On the weekend I went to a fair. There was a Ferris wheel, it went zooming around. It was so much fun.
By Edie

On the weekend I got some bunk beds and I am on the top bunk. It's fun I can touch the roof.
By Hollie


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